Short- And Long-Term Effects of Director Dealings on The Share Price: Evidence from the UK

 You may consider the following points for improvement, i. The introduction section can become shorter, e.g., 3 pages or 4 pages max, addressing the background to the topic, importance of the question, and your contribution. It could be restructured by putting your contribution in the end of the introduction section, highlighting the gap in literature and your original contribution, doesn’t need to be longer than half-page in general. ii. For the analysis of data, if the tables are taken from other studies.