Health promotion presentation for the brownies on the importance of staying physically active

Description

This is an oral presentation that is recorded and marked on relevance and technical excellence only. All details are in the attached document. As you will see, this is a resit. The student originally scored 36%. When rewriting, the writers job is to compare the students crib sheet to the markers feedback with a view to rectifying the shortcoming’s identified and then further developing the content as necessary. As you will see, there is also the University’s guidelines for the exercise attached. As a presentation, the work needs to flow, with a sentence structure that is easy on the ears.