Elmhurst hospital Proposal

 You may want to focus feedback on the following questions: Is there a clearly stated problem that the proposal is addressing? Have possible solutions been included, and are they logical? Is there enough evidence to support the proposed solution as the best one? Is the implementation clear, and/or are next steps clearly indicated? Is there too much / not enough information for you as a reader, and a potential decision-maker, about the proposal? Have all of the usual proposal sections been included, as appropriate? Is the proposal laid out in a clear, easy-to-follow format, with parallel headings, good use of visuals as appropriate, good layout and design? Is the language clear, correct, and easy to understand?