Effects of Divorce

 — This was a good topic choice, and you offer some good information regarding divorce. However, it’s unclear for most of the essay what position you’re taking on the issue, meaning there’s no clear argument throughout. That’s a real problem when the assignment is an argument essay! A few other significant issues occur as well; see my feedback for each rubric item as well as my notes on your essay itself for additional feedback. I’d like to give you the opportunity to revise and resubmit this essay for an improved grade; to take advantage of this opportunity.