Advertising companies and their influence on customers

This is the topic: Advertising surrounds us in modern Westernised society, whether we are aware of it or not. Examine and critique the ways that advertising companies continue to influence potential customers now that network television and print media are losing their market dominance. Attached is my thesis & introduction with some feedback. Please add some background to my thesis statement and two supporting points. Overall, my thesis statement needs to be improved. The essay will be 5 pages with double-spaced. Please write 1 page annotated bibliography according to the instructions. In total, I need 6 pages essay.