Career goal statement

Hello, Write a Career goal statement to apply for graduate school and the major is health promotion. 

 – The reason I pick this major: Strong believe that as we grow we need health awareness. we need not just education, people need education with support and action helps them to do the best choice. Also, people need to acquire the necessary to develop knowledge and skills to live a healthy lifestyle. Also, prevention is better than treatment. – The purpose: Studying all parts of the health promotion as it affects our life through our policies, behavior, environment, All that how it fits in our house, work. – the goal: Helping people by the supportive and awareness that will Make the good health impacts in our lives and reduce the mortality rate. If there is a mention for the school name just leave it like that 
(…..) and I will write it later. What attracted you to this field of study? Because we need this major in our life to help us live longer with good health. Also, helping people to live better. In my country they do not have enough education about health promotion and the way that we live is impacting our health. How do you plan to use your education and training? To speared my education and helping people to think and live a healthier life by supportive and encouraging healthy ways to be the easier choice topic. Does your academic record reflect your ability in the field you desire? As I graduated from the base of community public health that improves my knowledge and giving me experiences through the classes and the community work, and that’s what is making my passion increase to study the health promotion. What particular strengths do you possess that qualify you for the program?