Licenses switching cost from perpetual model to cloud

Licenses switching cost from perpetual model to cloud (subscription): A case study in an Omani government 

Paper details there some comments in the word file from two supervisor .. in addition to that here also some comments to be changed 1. The problem statement is not clear. Most of the contents under “problem statement” are actually “background/introduction”. The problem should be specific, e.g. lack of a costing model for comparing subscription and perpetual models for e-government software licensing. You introduction section should lead to this direction. 2. Correct referencing style. You may learn APA style from https://www.apastyle.org/ and https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/research_and_citation/apa_style/apa_formatting_and_style_guide/general_format.html 3. Software licensing and costing models are the main topics. LR should start with these two topics before moving on to E-government and software licensing in e-government. 4. Identification of factors is an important task. It is not clear how did you identify them. You are supposed to study existing literature on different costing models, then analyse them in a table which serves as a matrix of studies vs factors – what factors were considered in each study. Likewise, grouping of the factors requires a sound basis. 5. There are quite some incomprehensible sentences. Please go through each paragraphs a few times after writing it. 6. How did you derive the equations? The method is not clear